OH HELL YEAH FINALLY AN UPDATE! I took solid 3 hours off full review to set things straight. So il mostly just put personal likes and dislikes on this game, as i said in my first comment here this comment wont be about hate, but rather instead to speak out off my mind so with that out off the way lets get started with positive things.
The grind has been handled PERFECTLY, unlike in version 0.1 grind here doesnt feel as much hard nor exhausting which considering the fact that it was one off my main complaints im happy that it got fixed with side jobs, talents and overall lowering the prices off certain items.
The dynamic cutscenes when story is progressing is actually a VERY nice touch counting in the fact that its an novel game any type off Dynamic cutscene makes the game much more enjoyable to read.
I cant help but recognize that Millie (which a little spoiler alert for people that havent played the game yet its the small girl our mc takes home), went through a little re-design while something like this seems small its a welcoming change, but i wont mind if we see the old 0.1 version either as i said its a small change that wont really affect it in the long run, but il still count it as a positive.
And last but not least the minigame for the job where you connect the signs together is also well implemented hope i see more off these in the future (it would be even better if us players are allowed to choose the minigame, while if we still go random we get like a decent 15% bonus).
Ok now that we have putted positive things out off the way lets talk about negatives which there arent a lot, but still there are some.
While it does make sense the sign "harasment", should not be that much roughly called, it would be better if it was called an "sexual action" or smth like that because idk if im the snowflake here but if i see "harasment" i go instantly save and then try it to see if something actually hapens (spoiler for people that dont play, but are curious it does not)
Now idk if this will be implemented in the future updates, but in the current version interaction outside off 2 characters (which are Millie and Iris) does not exist, now i know that those 2 and mc are probably the most important ones in this story but it would still be nice if we have some side characters to interact with as well or even better have some more lore important characters (spoiler alert: like for example Millie's sister, mc's father something like that)
And one off the BIGGEST flaws off this update is: WE STILL CANT PRANK THEM JOHN!
Well this was my you can say "deeper" reviews about this game since in the last version i just left a quick comment and that's it, but that one didn't do enough justice so i patiently waited for this update, still even tho i pointed out some flaws in this game i still LOVE IT! Hope i get to see more from you NC131!
To be honest, I add that so I can track the time when I develop the game xD but looks like it's gonna help other people too, so I leave it as it is lol
just played the game and i am in love with it (the story is awesome and i cant wait to see what its like in future updates), and if you need any support like money or art (im an artist) i can try to help just dm me on twitter https://twitter.com/DiddyKing2000 Keep up the amazing progress and i wish you the best of luck
no problem just another thing i should add i do my art traditionally but im real good at drawing armor and suit designs so like keep me in the back of the mind if you need help with stuff, have a good day and the rest of your week/month and year.
Your game is very interesting, I like it! But there is just one thing, maybe you could make it easier to get money, or the things get less expensive, idk, and the energy bar too, just an idea, waiting for the next update O_O
This is such a great start for the game. I really got into the story and getting to know the characters. Great game so far. Really looking forward to future updates, as they arrive.
Really interesting game, if you can add for example 10 euro -> i can download new version 2 days sooner it will be nice. (only 1x pay, its not good idea to pay for every version.. just little donate)
Well i cannot really say much about this game plot sounds cool at the moment and unique artstyle makes this novel stick out however (please dont take this as a hate i really want this novel to thrive just bc off its uniuqeness) PLEASE DO SOMETHING ABOUT GRIND FFS I SWEAR ITS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO SURVIVE THROUGH THE WEEK I CAN TELL YOU WANTED THIS TO BECOME A REALISTIC NOVEL BUT YOU DIDNT HAVE TO GO THIS FAR!
XD I feel you Zack! you're not the only one x], and that's the reason why I'm doing the update~ So you can calm the caps down, and join discord if you want to see the update goes~!
(I forgor to reduce the item prices on this version which is my bad xD)
But in all seriousness, interesting little game you have here. Are the background sprites placeholders or an artistic style? Millie is also super cute, looking forward to what comes next
its the art style xD well old ones, I'm updating the arts in this update x] Thank you Sniperplays! Glad you enjoyed the V0.1! You can join my discord server to see how the update's going~ ^^
Inspired by Imouto! live and Seifuku!, I see. Really nice. Crisp art and nice to have a mini game - but the input lags a bit. And yes, Daddy Kratos was right, I was not prepared for that prologue ;-P I'll keep an eye on this one.
its a good game but money is a problem even if you get a Perfect on the mini game sometimes you still don't even make 500 which is barely enough to get the cheap food and sometimes the store is even out of That so you have to buy the medium which gets up to like 600 And because you can't make any money on the weekends if becomes a problem
you could use cheat engine, if you know what it is, if you do use cheat engine, the memory for lira is: for me. idk if its diffrent for other people so take my commet with a grain of salt!
lmao, I am making a game to for a diff acc, I just make a input area over the breasts of the charater that changes the money var to add +100 (if you are using variables)
Its quite similar to Imouto life! Monochrome(interact,UIs,stuffs,..) but you added a story between gameplay which is make it different from original one.I really like how the story goes,characters,arts.I have some requests:
-Skip text
-Add quest UI(For who skip the story but still want to know what to do)
-Faster/Skip cooking scense,interact scenses,ect,..(They go really slow,someone will quit while playing because of that.)
-No more crash while playing (or just because my pc weak as hell)
After all,i can see how many efforts you gives in this game.I really appreciate it,its a great game,i hope you make more games with new gameplays and story in future!
Usually people take everything from the previous and just make minor changes, but you went over and beyond making this game truly yours. And I am incredibly excited about where you go with this title.
As a fan of Imouto! Monochrome, I thank you for making this project. However, I will not insult this work by calling it a "clone". This has "You" written all over it and that is something that should be acknowledged.
I see. You do what you wanna do, but I personally would either just make her at least 18 right off the bat or not give us any naughty scenes until her birthday comes, cause it's kinda weird that we have the option in the first place, not gonna lie. Aside from that frankly major overlook, the game is pretty good
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OH HELL YEAH FINALLY AN UPDATE! I took solid 3 hours off full review to set things straight. So il mostly just put personal likes and dislikes on this game, as i said in my first comment here this comment wont be about hate, but rather instead to speak out off my mind so with that out off the way lets get started with positive things.Ok now that we have putted positive things out off the way lets talk about negatives which there arent a lot, but still there are some.
"harasment" i go instantly save and then try it to see if something actually hapens (spoiler for people that dont play, but are curious it does not)Well this was my you can say "deeper" reviews about this game since in the last version i just left a quick comment and that's it, but that one didn't do enough justice so i patiently waited for this update, still even tho i pointed out some flaws in this game i still LOVE IT! Hope i get to see more from you NC131!
Ayyy! I really appreciate your honest review and sharing your feedback Zack on crack! ^^
If you have any other suggestions, do not hesitate to tell me! =]
Love that there's a real clock at the bottom of the screen. Really liked that.
To be honest, I add that so I can track the time when I develop the game xD but looks like it's gonna help other people too, so I leave it as it is lol
I just found this game today and absolutely loved it. I hope one day I am in a position to support you and your game but for now I am broke sorry ;-;
Thank you for playing the Early access LayersSG! ^^
glad you enjoyed it !
and don't worry, your support by giving a rate and positive review is enough~ =]
is it possible to leave her without a shirt?
heya natep115!
and no, you can't, the purpose for the option "MHN" on "H" option would be useless ^^
whats the point of removing cloths in the wardrobe then?
Why not? It's a Fan service ;]
also im not going to spoil the future reason for that~ x]
How do I dodge on Android here?
Oh yeah you cant dodge the attack from millie yet, since there's no changes for the prologue, try to skip the prologue
Oh ok
LETS FUCKING GO 0.2
Please update me when the full version is released :)
That's gonna take years xD
I can wait xdd
Don't forget to support me by giving ratings, review, and feedback so I'm determined to make this game even more fun and playable in the future ;]
just played the game and i am in love with it (the story is awesome and i cant wait to see what its like in future updates), and if you need any support like money or art (im an artist) i can try to help just dm me on twitter https://twitter.com/DiddyKing2000 Keep up the amazing progress and i wish you the best of luck
Thank you so much Diddyking!
I will consider your offer in the future! ^^
no problem just another thing i should add i do my art traditionally but im real good at drawing armor and suit designs so like keep me in the back of the mind if you need help with stuff, have a good day and the rest of your week/month and year.
Can i play it on mobile device?
Hello VinNouzen!
In this 0.1 version, unfortunately, you can't...
but in 0.2, i will try to release the android version too! ^^
Thanks, really can't wait for it
When 0.2 will relese
Hello MilkaRo1!
This month! ^^
Your game is very interesting, I like it! But there is just one thing, maybe you could make it easier to get money, or the things get less expensive, idk, and the energy bar too, just an idea, waiting for the next update O_O
Thank you xasa! For playing the 0.1 version! ^^
Don't worry, those problems have been fixed in this 0.2 update =]
bro, ur game pretty cool, and if u'll need a translation to russian language, I can help u
Ayy thank you again ellogger for the support!
you can contact me on discord when 0.2 update is released ;]
im super excited for the next version. So far this game is amazing!
Thank you for playing Shaffermaxwell! ^^
glad you enjoyed it!
You can join the discord server to see the progress too if you want~
Still waiting for it
waiting for...?
for v0.2 of course
LOL you're in the server and we already friends in discord, you can check my status to see the progress xD
oops didnt know about it my bad
all good x] feel free to chat me there
I desire the romance path to are co worker
there'll be option for it in the future update x]
This is such a great start for the game. I really got into the story and getting to know the characters. Great game so far. Really looking forward to future updates, as they arrive.
Glad you enjoyed the game Daring-san! ^^
the next update is near ;]
Thank you so much koli dx for playing!! ^^
I'm honoured that you have to make an account just to make a comment about my game! glad you enjoyed the V0.1~! =D
Really interesting game, if you can add for example 10 euro -> i can download new version 2 days sooner it will be nice. (only 1x pay, its not good idea to pay for every version.. just little donate)
New version will be released at the same time ^^ so no need to wait for a couple of days before its on public~ =D
Thank you headshotrecoil! ^^
Thank you so much for playing l10yd! ^^
xD True, someone even got to grind until day 32 to get enough liras to actually buy stuff lol
It's coming out next month ;] (Hopefully! been speedrunning the update xD)
Thank you for replying to me at this time. Have a good rest!(ノ´▽`)ノ♪
Thank you~! =]
为什么我的电脑隔离了文件
renpy游戏经常出现这种情况,我可以确认游戏是安全的~^^
Well i cannot really say much about this game plot sounds cool at the moment and unique artstyle makes this novel stick out however (please dont take this as a hate i really want this novel to thrive just bc off its uniuqeness) PLEASE DO SOMETHING ABOUT GRIND FFS I SWEAR ITS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO SURVIVE THROUGH THE WEEK I CAN TELL YOU WANTED THIS TO BECOME A REALISTIC NOVEL BUT YOU DIDNT HAVE TO GO THIS FAR!
XD I feel you Zack! you're not the only one x], and that's the reason why I'm doing the update~
So you can calm the caps down, and join discord if you want to see the update goes~!
(I forgor to reduce the item prices on this version which is my bad xD)
Reminds me a lot of the Imouto! Seikatsu games, but more worked out. Great game, can't wait for the next updates!
It is in fact inspired by Inusuku's game x] but with my own story~
Thank you for playing WarriorFalls! ^^
God i hope i can prank her in the next version.
But in all seriousness, interesting little game you have here. Are the background sprites placeholders or an artistic style? Millie is also super cute, looking forward to what comes next
You'll get to prank her john ;]
its the art style xD well old ones, I'm updating the arts in this update x]
Thank you Sniperplays! Glad you enjoyed the V0.1!
You can join my discord server to see how the update's going~ ^^
will do~!
is there sex?
There will ;]
pak, win 7 jalan gak
Mungkin, coba aja =]
ya girl wont put out, and you steadily lose money, energy and food no matter how hard you try.
10/10 best life sim ive ever played. full realism.
seriously tho, this is great. cant wait for an update sir excellent job.
She got a free place to live, got free food, yet demand for more 💀
XD
It'll be fixed in this update, thank you ampers&!
Raymond: "ayo where my Salary at?"
Iris:
LMAOOO This is the best one so far! XD
Man this is great! I'll put it on my social media LOL
Thanks for the effort to make the meme Dyinin! xD
NO
thank you for making a great game with great potential 😎
Inspired by Imouto! live and Seifuku!, I see. Really nice. Crisp art and nice to have a mini game - but the input lags a bit. And yes, Daddy Kratos was right, I was not prepared for that prologue ;-P I'll keep an eye on this one.
XD She's not an ordinary girl
Will help you fend off the dark spawns in the future update!
and thank you CYFire2402! more goofy ahh minigame will come x]
Really like the game, just wish it was easier to get more money, when everything cost so much.
XD understand-able you're not alone since i also feel the same when i play my own game LOL
I'll fix it in this update! thank you LaD1x!
Really love the minimalist art style unless thats just because its V0.1 but if it is its awesome, if not keep up the good work cause its good
I'll stay with the monochrome style since its way easier to color (which take less time to draw for the update!)
and thank you Yutoe for the support! ^^
This game inspires me to find a homeless women on the street and bring her home with me. PS: that means I love it!!!!
jit trippin
LOL Wait that's not the game supposed-
If only there's one like her...
Thank you tho! xD
This really caught my eye since the style was very similar to Inusuku and I was right!
What was your favorite?
Imouto! Life ~Fantasy~ or imouto!? Life ~Monochrome~
Good luck on your development!
For daily life aspect, more into Fantasy
but for weekend events more into Life monochrome =]
And thank you NepyNepyNep! ^^
its a good game but money is a problem even if you get a Perfect on the mini game sometimes you still don't even make 500 which is barely enough to get the cheap food and sometimes the store is even out of That so you have to buy the medium which gets up to like 600 And because you can't make any money on the weekends if becomes a problem
I realize the problem there too Dx
It's my bad... I'm sorry for forgeting to decrease the price in this version.
That's why I do the update now^^!
Thanks for sharing your feedback!
Damn, I see this game to be hella popular at full realease (sex or not), your very talented, when can I expect the next update
I agreed with ya
Theres an announcement, its on development log, right above the comment lol
Aww thank you! =D
And also hella lots of brain cells going to be spilled xD
I already made the announcement^^
just like Labia said, it's up up above~
or you can join the discord server, or add me on my social media!
do you have twitter? or you can add me on discord @Forzx#1616 if you ever need help with something!
I do have Twitter! rarely active tho Dx search for @NC131_
I saw you in my discord server, I'll add you ;]
cool game, don't stop
Thank you for the support ellogger^^!
do you planning add cheat to the game in the future bc its hard to earn libra tho
I thought about it too, and yes! I'll add the cheat in the next update, also gonna add a repeatable quest to earn more lira!
Thank you for reminding me =] !
you could use cheat engine, if you know what it is, if you do use cheat engine, the memory for lira is: for me. idk if its diffrent for other people so take my commet with a grain of salt!
(only use cheat engine if you know how to)
Whoaa! you nailed the cheat engine! I tried to use that too but... apparently, I can't find the string xD
GG for you who found it^^!
that could help some people since it's pretty hard to get Lira, even myself LOL
lmao, I am making a game to for a diff acc, I just make a input area over the breasts of the charater that changes the money var to add +100 (if you are using variables)
PS: what programming language do you use?
javascript, C, C#?
Whoa... that's incredible!
It's python ^^
I tried C# on unity 3 years ago... and somehow I lost track of it xD
i tried cheat engine too but it didn't work for me
please my man teach us your ways
Its quite similar to Imouto life! Monochrome(interact,UIs,stuffs,..) but you added a story between gameplay which is make it different from original one.I really like how the story goes,characters,arts.I have some requests:
-Skip text
-Add quest UI(For who skip the story but still want to know what to do)
-Faster/Skip cooking scense,interact scenses,ect,..(They go really slow,someone will quit while playing because of that.)
-No more crash while playing (or just because my pc weak as hell)
After all,i can see how many efforts you gives in this game.I really appreciate it,its a great game,i hope you make more games with new gameplays and story in future!
Omg! Glad you enjoyed the game Skypers^^!
and yes I must admit I'm inspired by that game!
which is why I want to remake my UI and stuff in the next update xD
Suggestion accepted, Thank you!
oh? it's crashing? may I have the report?
please send it to my Email so I can inspect it^^
bcore0130@gmail.com
This is a great inspired game.
Usually people take everything from the previous and just make minor changes, but you went over and beyond making this game truly yours. And I am incredibly excited about where you go with this title.
As a fan of Imouto! Monochrome, I thank you for making this project. However, I will not insult this work by calling it a "clone". This has "You" written all over it and that is something that should be acknowledged.
Phenomenal work!
Wow! As a fellow Imouto! monochrome fan, I really... Really thank you for the support!
and yes, I am honestly mesmerized by the daily life aspect of Imouto! game, been a fan of Inusuku since the first game xD
its wonderful, it has a touch of Imouto but not the exact same thing!
Thank you Forzx! Fellow imouto gang! x]
please add android version
Hehe, of course^^! The next update is also available for mac too~
Question: how old is Millie? Cause like, she looks tiny lol, thought it was odd
She's 18^^
You'll encounter her birthday scene in... probably v0.2 or v0.3!
As I expand the story and explain some stuff and possibilities^^
wait, so that creates a big problem. It means we can already peek her in the shower while she's still 17, among other stuff
And that's the reason why Iris is persistent to take Millie to her apartment, She is worried that Raymond trying to do something to her.
So, go for the SFW route until her birthday scene ;]
I see. You do what you wanna do, but I personally would either just make her at least 18 right off the bat or not give us any naughty scenes until her birthday comes, cause it's kinda weird that we have the option in the first place, not gonna lie. Aside from that frankly major overlook, the game is pretty good
xD yeah, I'll try to change that in the next update! and thank you for the support!
pretty epic game so far, if you are taking suggestions then i would love some more pee content
I'm glad you enjoyed it!! 😁
And of course! feel free to share your suggestion so we both can enjoy the game, even more~ 🤝
Spoiler: in the future update, there's going to be a feature where you can do stuff with her while peeing ;]youre awesome man
No, you.
Well to be fair, we all are awesome! 👌