I happened to see your game over at Kimochi. I'm not sure if I can show you the link due to it being a pirate site. Though, pirate sites have their use for advertising games.
Oh! I don't mind if the game was on other sites, I'm happy if someone puts and shares my game on their website tbh! ^^
But! Be aware that I'm not responsible for any virus attack or anything after you download it from the other sites since all I put in the game zip file is just Thanks for downloading text =3
even there aren't many NSFW contents now,but I just addicted Myself into thiswonderful game.
and for My beloved game.I have some suggestions for you My Dear:P
1.in the prologue.there is a QTE act.butttt, I can't do ANYTHING to react this!!!!AND I just die and die and die(I'mAndroid BTW)SO I just skip the prologue,and I don't know the previous stories between MC and millie:(
2.the clothes are too expensive!I have to workreallyhard to earn the money(almost 1k per day in happy mood)
3.This game is really ADDICTING.when I playing it,I just forget the time:( even I have class in the morning. hahahah I m just kidding:)))
Actually I don't have questions anymore. the only thing is the content are so limited.I really wanna see the update:P
BTW THX for your developing,I love the gamejust like I love you(hahaah just kidding(^3^))
The dev was working on the next update, he's been revamping most of the stuff in the game, including the prologue, the stores (adding more clothes), and adding more options in the game.
And i think he mentioned that the third update, he will finish the first chapter (the gun making part) so in the next update he doesn't need people to replay the game
Ohh, basically you can do whatever you want, being nice or something, the story isn't focused on romance, more on the mystery and the world... In short Life simulation visual novel... I guess Dx
Do you need help on improving on grammar? I'm an english major and I can gladly help improve the english to make the story feel more cohesive. Either way, I really like this game! Can't wait for the update
I put together a bunch of texts that I feel are more correct than what is in the game. "A" texts are what is already present, while "B" is the proposed alternatives. "C" is notes on my reasoning, wherever I feel appropriate.
The version played is v0.2.
#1A: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday and he need an urgent request."
#1B: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday, he had an urgent request."
#1C: The addition of an "," helps the sentence flow more naturally.
In the context of this sentence "he need an urgent request" doesn't make sense in English. This is because it implies that the father is creating a situation, rather than wanting one to be resolved.
#2A: Raymond - "A cheap weaponry...it mays sound impossible, but..."
#2B: Raymond - "Cheap weapons. It may sound impossible, but..."
#2C: While "weaponry" is technically correct, it doesn't naturally fit in this context. The "..." was replaced by a "." because the overuse of an "..." can feel weird, and a single period here makes Raymond sound more experienced in his field. "Mays" is definately wrong, with the only correct usage in English being as a name - typically a last one. EG, "Billy Mays".
#3A: Raymond - "Yeah, also gather some information about the crystals in the city."
#3B: Raymond - "Yeah, also while gathering information about crystals in the city."
#3C: The sentence doesn't flow quite right. While technically correct, the context with prior text boxes makes it feel unnatural.
#4A: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city"
#4B: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city."
#5A: Raymond - So I, as his son and as a weapon tinkerer, travel from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5B: Raymond - So I, as his son and weapon tinkerer, traveled from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5C: By removing the "as a", the sentence feels less repetitive. That part is actually fine, but I felt that I should mention the alternative wording. "traveled" is more natural for this sentence, due to being past tense. "travel" implies present or future tense.
#6A: Raymond - "Father had his hopes on me, having to accomplish it all in a month."
#6B: Raymond - "Father pinned his hopes on me, to accomplish it all in a month."
#6C: "had his hopes on me" is not a wording used in English. Thus, I replaced it with something that conveys a similar idea but recognized in English. "having to accomplish it all in a month" is technically correct, but the context makes it less natural than the rewritten version.
#7A: Raymond - "For if were to fail, my father's hand would be forced, having to manufacture weapons of inferior quality."
#7B: Raymond - "If I were to fail, my father would be forced to manufacture weapons of inferior quality.
#7C: "For if were to fail" is incorrect. It doesn't convey as much information as it could, and trying to speak it as-is would be awkward. When in doubt about text, speak it out loud and see if rolls off the tongue naturally. "My father's hand would be forced" Is technically correct and a wording often used in English. The issue is that what comes afterwards didn't flow naturally. I recommend using this wording elsewhere in the game, as it is a good one.
#8A: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes but most importantly, wasting his time.
#8B: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes, but more importantly, wasting his time.
#8C: Without the extra comma, the sentence is hard to say in real life and more difficult to read. "most importantly" while technically and contextually correct, is not often used in English. "more importantly" is a much more common way of conveying the idea. Both wordings are valid!
#9A: Raymond - "It was my father recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#9B: Raymond - "It was my father's recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#10A: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing."
#10B: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing, I've decided to use an alternative core for the weapon."
10C: Technically correct, but didn't feel quite right. By integrating both sentences together, the sudden stop from "weapon designing." is removed.
11A: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took it, and researched it until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took them, and researched until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took one, and researched it until now."
11C: By using "it", you imply a single crystal, while "ones" is plural. I put together two revised texts, one for a plurality of crystals - and the other singular. I think the plural text is better, but I don't know the full story.
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend."
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend..."
12C: The sentence is correct, it just feels awkward because the period is a hard-stop. By having the trailing "...", it is implied something grabbed Raymond's attention.
13A: Girl - "All I know is ... I've been in a street ever since."
13B: Girl - "All I know...I've always lived on the street."
13C: The formatting of " ... " is a bit odd, so I altered it slightly. The latter half of the sentence is confusing, in a way that I believe to be unintentional.
14A: Girl - "Why bother ask those questions."
14B: Girl - "Why bother, asking those questions?"
14B: Girl - "Why bother asking those questions."
14C: The original form felt awkward. I recommend the revision with the "?", but the version with "." may be suitable if she is making a statement.
15A: Raymond - "They kidnap almost every outcast in every dome city."
15B: Raymond - "They kidnap outcasts in all dome cities."
15C: Using "every" twice feels very repetitive and makes the sentence harder to parse.
16A: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of day you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of time you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the number of days you've spent with Millie."
16C: Using "day" twice doesn't feel good. In addition to this, the latter "day" lacks plurality. When more than one day is spent with someone, "days" is more appropriate.
Aside from text, I have a bit of confusion regarding the SFW mode: is it "on" or "off"? Having text that says "SFW mode is ON/OFF", with the appropriate word being hi-lighted would make the toggle more understandable.
I see a lot of Imouto! Monochrome in it, that is what drew my interest in it. This is the sort of game I can see Sankaku Complex doing an article on, in a positive way of course.
You might want to look into alternatives for donations, Patreon is infamous for getting games censored.
I can see Discord having issue with sexual content of Millie, there is Revolt as an alternative to it. Other social media platform alternatives.
And what do you mean by "I can see Sankaku Complex doing an article on"? i'm kinda curious with the article eheh... drop me the link if you don't mind~
And thank you for sharing for the alternative tho! I'll try it when the 0.3 update is out! ^^
Sankaku Complex is a based article blog that covers mostly Japanese anime/ games/ manga/ news. They also cover censorship and wokeness controversy. They covered an article on a an adult game that was unfairly denied from Steam. Some articles cover hentai games. They kind of do there own thing over there, which you'll see if you ever take the time to go through their articles.
Since the game has charm I mentioned it over there in the forums of Sankaku Complex. Though you need to create an account to view some of the NSFW thread sections. I provided a link so that others can view the itchio page for "Living in Viellci"
You can make a video for it on LBRY/Odessy, even if it has adult content. Another idea of promoting your game is that you could put official game cg on the anime image boards (boorus), like Gelbooru to promote your game.
As for what happened to MDRG, that was wrong on Steam's part and that made Steam look bad again. Wither they realize it or not.
Heya Nick 08 cam! and massive thanks Labia for the reply! yes please do provide video report and detailed problem so I can diagnose the problem to fix it ^^
I really like the new improvements and I will only say that there's probably need to be a more explicit description of the "harasment" menu, because I did found out that there are different dialogues when your trust and interest is like double the requirment, especially for the first kiss. I hope in the future updates those could be count similiar to Iris' trust.
Anyway, I must say, the story is actually really interesting! I just love the setting, it's not that much futuristic and I love MC and Iris' place in this world, it feels unique. For some reason I also really liked the park location, maybe its just the perspective, but it feels somewhat massive and tall. In my head, the green can make a beautiful contrast for this sort of setting!
Also, I feel like it was already noticed, but the clothes are kinda broken. Some of them you could buy and then lose just as you walk into your house, and other were using Millie's standart clothes for the movie cutscene (maybe it's just not fully implemented). And for some reason my map was just split up horizontally. It worked tho
Oh my~ Thank you so much Cinnamo O for the feedback!!
Im interested about the "harasment" menu you're talking about and the split up horizontally map. Do you mind to tell me more about it? like giving me a screenshot of it and tell me the problem? =] I want to fix it rightaway before starting the next update ehe
Ofc, take your time! It's honestly not hard at all to impress me so I'm sure I'm going to be blown away by the update. And plus I also get that life can get in the way, so always prioritize yourself before your work
I managed to get Millie's lust level pretty high, but that doesn't seem to change anything and I still can't figure out what that's for exactly, maybe I'm missing something. I assume the purpose of it still hasn't been implemented and it will be revealed in a next update?
If you check the read me.txt, he mentioned that Millie's lust doesnt do anything in this version, and yeah maybe the dev will do something about it in the next update
OH HELL YEAH FINALLY AN UPDATE! I took solid 3 hours off full review to set things straight. So il mostly just put personal likes and dislikes on this game, as i said in my first comment here this comment wont be about hate, but rather instead to speak out off my mind so with that out off the way lets get started with positive things.
The grind has been handled PERFECTLY, unlike in version 0.1 grind here doesnt feel as much hard nor exhausting which considering the fact that it was one off my main complaints im happy that it got fixed with side jobs, talents and overall lowering the prices off certain items.
The dynamic cutscenes when story is progressing is actually a VERY nice touch counting in the fact that its an novel game any type off Dynamic cutscene makes the game much more enjoyable to read.
I cant help but recognize that Millie (which a little spoiler alert for people that havent played the game yet its the small girl our mc takes home), went through a little re-design while something like this seems small its a welcoming change, but i wont mind if we see the old 0.1 version either as i said its a small change that wont really affect it in the long run, but il still count it as a positive.
And last but not least the minigame for the job where you connect the signs together is also well implemented hope i see more off these in the future (it would be even better if us players are allowed to choose the minigame, while if we still go random we get like a decent 15% bonus).
Ok now that we have putted positive things out off the way lets talk about negatives which there arent a lot, but still there are some.
While it does make sense the sign "harasment", should not be that much roughly called, it would be better if it was called an "sexual action" or smth like that because idk if im the snowflake here but if i see "harasment" i go instantly save and then try it to see if something actually hapens (spoiler for people that dont play, but are curious it does not)
Now idk if this will be implemented in the future updates, but in the current version interaction outside off 2 characters (which are Millie and Iris) does not exist, now i know that those 2 and mc are probably the most important ones in this story but it would still be nice if we have some side characters to interact with as well or even better have some more lore important characters (spoiler alert: like for example Millie's sister, mc's father something like that)
And one off the BIGGEST flaws off this update is: WE STILL CANT PRANK THEM JOHN!
Well this was my you can say "deeper" reviews about this game since in the last version i just left a quick comment and that's it, but that one didn't do enough justice so i patiently waited for this update, still even tho i pointed out some flaws in this game i still LOVE IT! Hope i get to see more from you NC131!
To be honest, I add that so I can track the time when I develop the game xD but looks like it's gonna help other people too, so I leave it as it is lol
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android ver keeps crashing every couple minutes making the game unplayable
What device you're using?
samsung galaxy a13
Do you ever play any renpy games before?
no i havnt
Ahh, It seems the problem is caused by the Renpy itself
Can someone please explain why RenPy games suddenly started crashing on my phone? : r/RenPy (reddit.com)
https://github.com/renpy/renpy/issues/3643
Android port is still kinda unstable, I recommend trying the Win/Lin/ Mac
version instead, or use other android device
How to get that bath scene
Make sure SFW toggle off, and have above 200 trust
I happened to see your game over at Kimochi. I'm not sure if I can show you the link due to it being a pirate site. Though, pirate sites have their use for advertising games.
Oh! I don't mind if the game was on other sites, I'm happy if someone puts and shares my game on their website tbh! ^^
But! Be aware that I'm not responsible for any virus attack or anything
after you download it from the other sites since all I put in the game zip file is just Thanks for downloading text =3
Cuz I forgor to add the function there 😔
But don't worry, in the next update, the prologue will be revamped ;]
i swear im blind
i cant figure out how to leave that clothing store
guess i was blind
Make sure to check the shirt page on night mode, you forgot to buy the camisole
- Labia
You know what?
I realllllly really love this game:D
even there aren't many NSFW contents now,but I just addicted Myself into thiswonderful game.
and for My beloved game.I have some suggestions for you My Dear:P
1.in the prologue.there is a QTE act.butttt, I can't do ANYTHING to react this!!!!AND I just die and die and die(I'mAndroid BTW)SO I just skip the prologue,and I don't know the previous stories between MC and millie:(
2.the clothes are too expensive!I have to workreallyhard to earn the money(almost 1k per day in happy mood)
3.This game is really ADDICTING.when I playing it,I just forget the time:( even I have class in the morning. hahahah I m just kidding:)))
Actually I don't have questions anymore. the only thing is the content are so limited.I really wanna see the update:P
BTW THX for your developing,I love the gamejust like I love you(hahaah just kidding(^3^))
The dev was working on the next update, he's been revamping most of the stuff in the game, including the prologue, the stores (adding more clothes), and adding more options in the game.
And i think he mentioned that the third update, he will finish the first chapter (the gun making part) so in the next update he doesn't need people to replay the game
Thanks for leaving your review and feedback on the game YUN01 ^^
Yes don't worry, the prologue is being reworked so, you don't miss anything there =3
and about the earning, it is also being reworked xD
I'm still unsure what makes it addicting, if you mind, do tell me the addicting part, and I want to improve it =]
Is there any chance of having the ability to change the name of the MC?
No, I don't think you can. The dev said, the story is based on his manga
Ok, thanks. Goodbye.
WOOOOOOOO
What's with the woo-ing 😭😭
It is nice to have a good ‘woo’ in awhile. WOOOOOOOO!
hmm, I guess you're right. WOOOOOOOO!
WOOOOOOOO!
WOOOOOOOO！
The god is back! WOOOOOOOOOO
Wuh? where?! 😱
Wait, I thought u were the one that made the previous living with imouto?
what do you mean by previous living with imouto? 🤨🤨
One question: DO you know Inusuku?
yes I DO =3
Make sure to check the shirt page on night mode, you forgot to buy the camisole
When we getting another update love this game
Around october - december
based on my financial, irl situation, and the devices ^
What fetishes/tags?
Not quite sure, as I will expand and add more stuff with every update... Vanilla for sure
Will this game let you be a pos or is this full wholesome/romance is basically what I'm wondering tbh
Ohh, basically you can do whatever you want, being nice or something, the story isn't focused on romance, more on the mystery and the world... In short Life simulation visual novel... I guess Dx
So I can abuse the loli?
Sorta, that will bring you to the bad end xD
Can anybody tell me the stroy of prologue
You can ask it on the server ;]
I'm on android how do i dodge the knife in the beginning?
You can't, the dev forgor to check that part, so you have to skip it lol
thank you
Do you need help on improving on grammar? I'm an english major and I can gladly help improve the english to make the story feel more cohesive. Either way, I really like this game! Can't wait for the update
Heya again Philly!
Sure! Hop into the discord server so I can contact you when I made a new script! ^^
Already in! My discord is ickyloops#2806
I put together a bunch of texts that I feel are more correct than what is in the game. "A" texts are what is already present, while "B" is the proposed alternatives. "C" is notes on my reasoning, wherever I feel appropriate.
The version played is v0.2.
#1A: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday and he need an urgent request."
#1B: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday, he had an urgent request."
#1C: The addition of an "," helps the sentence flow more naturally.
In the context of this sentence "he need an urgent request" doesn't make sense in English. This is because it implies that the father is creating a situation, rather than wanting one to be resolved.
#2A: Raymond - "A cheap weaponry...it mays sound impossible, but..."
#2B: Raymond - "Cheap weapons. It may sound impossible, but..."
#2C: While "weaponry" is technically correct, it doesn't naturally fit in this context. The "..." was replaced by a "." because the overuse of an "..." can feel weird, and a single period here makes Raymond sound more experienced in his field. "Mays" is definately wrong, with the only correct usage in English being as a name - typically a last one. EG, "Billy Mays".
#3A: Raymond - "Yeah, also gather some information about the crystals in the city."
#3B: Raymond - "Yeah, also while gathering information about crystals in the city."
#3C: The sentence doesn't flow quite right. While technically correct, the context with prior text boxes makes it feel unnatural.
#4A: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city"
#4B: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city."
#5A: Raymond - So I, as his son and as a weapon tinkerer, travel from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5B: Raymond - So I, as his son and weapon tinkerer, traveled from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5C: By removing the "as a", the sentence feels less repetitive. That part is actually fine, but I felt that I should mention the alternative wording. "traveled" is more natural for this sentence, due to being past tense. "travel" implies present or future tense.
#6A: Raymond - "Father had his hopes on me, having to accomplish it all in a month."
#6B: Raymond - "Father pinned his hopes on me, to accomplish it all in a month."
#6C: "had his hopes on me" is not a wording used in English. Thus, I replaced it with something that conveys a similar idea but recognized in English. "having to accomplish it all in a month" is technically correct, but the context makes it less natural than the rewritten version.
#7A: Raymond - "For if were to fail, my father's hand would be forced, having to manufacture weapons of inferior quality."
#7B: Raymond - "If I were to fail, my father would be forced to manufacture weapons of inferior quality.
#7C: "For if were to fail" is incorrect. It doesn't convey as much information as it could, and trying to speak it as-is would be awkward. When in doubt about text, speak it out loud and see if rolls off the tongue naturally. "My father's hand would be forced" Is technically correct and a wording often used in English. The issue is that what comes afterwards didn't flow naturally. I recommend using this wording elsewhere in the game, as it is a good one.
#8A: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes but most importantly, wasting his time.
#8B: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes, but more importantly, wasting his time.
#8C: Without the extra comma, the sentence is hard to say in real life and more difficult to read. "most importantly" while technically and contextually correct, is not often used in English. "more importantly" is a much more common way of conveying the idea. Both wordings are valid!
#9A: Raymond - "It was my father recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#9B: Raymond - "It was my father's recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#10A: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing."
#10B: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing, I've decided to use an alternative core for the weapon."
10C: Technically correct, but didn't feel quite right. By integrating both sentences together, the sudden stop from "weapon designing." is removed.
11A: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took it, and researched it until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took them, and researched until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took one, and researched it until now."
11C: By using "it", you imply a single crystal, while "ones" is plural. I put together two revised texts, one for a plurality of crystals - and the other singular. I think the plural text is better, but I don't know the full story.
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend."
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend..."
12C: The sentence is correct, it just feels awkward because the period is a hard-stop. By having the trailing "...", it is implied something grabbed Raymond's attention.
13A: Girl - "All I know is ... I've been in a street ever since."
13B: Girl - "All I know...I've always lived on the street."
13C: The formatting of " ... " is a bit odd, so I altered it slightly. The latter half of the sentence is confusing, in a way that I believe to be unintentional.
14A: Girl - "Why bother ask those questions."
14B: Girl - "Why bother, asking those questions?"
14B: Girl - "Why bother asking those questions."
14C: The original form felt awkward. I recommend the revision with the "?", but the version with "." may be suitable if she is making a statement.
15A: Raymond - "They kidnap almost every outcast in every dome city."
15B: Raymond - "They kidnap outcasts in all dome cities."
15C: Using "every" twice feels very repetitive and makes the sentence harder to parse.
16A: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of day you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of time you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the number of days you've spent with Millie."
16C: Using "day" twice doesn't feel good. In addition to this, the latter "day" lacks plurality. When more than one day is spent with someone, "days" is more appropriate.
Aside from text, I have a bit of confusion regarding the SFW mode: is it "on" or "off"? Having text that says "SFW mode is ON/OFF", with the appropriate word being hi-lighted would make the toggle more understandable.
Oh my... Thank you so much for the fix!
My apologies for the grammar mistakes in the current version 🙏😔
But don't you worry, I'm revamping the Prologue and the settings ;]
If you want to see the update goes, check out my discord server or the Patreon page, as I usually post the devlog there =3
A great game which has a unique style and alot of potential. Cant wait for the new update.
Sankyu for playing the game Igor.peo! ❤😁
The game design is very unique. I love it! Hope for new updates!
Glad you like it Tattierdragon36! I'm still working on the update ;]
you can join discord to see the progress~
Good shit
Thank you Metal 😎👍
This game is awesome keep it up (⌐■-■)👌
Will do my best! thanks, Kawaii21~ 😳🙏
I really liked the game. I look forward to continuing.
Thank you for playing the early-access VLADCO! ^^
Glad you liked it =]
You're welcome! Although this game is your first, it turned out to be in a cool design and a well-developed plot. Good luck with your future projects.
Aww, I'm also surprised too with the amount of support you guys gave to this game, I never expected it to be this much 😭🙏 Thank you again!
I didn't realize that I could click and drag on the map screen at first.
xD most people didn't even know that the map is drag-able
I see a lot of Imouto! Monochrome in it, that is what drew my interest in it. This is the sort of game I can see Sankaku Complex doing an article on, in a positive way of course.
You might want to look into alternatives for donations, Patreon is infamous for getting games censored.
I can see Discord having issue with sexual content of Millie, there is Revolt as an alternative to it. Other social media platform alternatives.
Alternatives:
SubscribeStar (Very popular for games that were kicked off Patreon)
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Aww thank you so much Rebel 357!
And what do you mean by "I can see Sankaku Complex doing an article on"?
i'm kinda curious with the article eheh... drop me the link if you don't mind~
And thank you for sharing for the alternative tho!
I'll try it when the 0.3 update is out! ^^
Sankaku Complex is a based article blog that covers mostly Japanese anime/ games/ manga/ news. They also cover censorship and wokeness controversy. They covered an article on a an adult game that was unfairly denied from Steam. Some articles cover hentai games. They kind of do there own thing over there, which you'll see if you ever take the time to go through their articles.
Since the game has charm I mentioned it over there in the forums of Sankaku Complex. Though you need to create an account to view some of the NSFW thread sections. I provided a link so that others can view the itchio page for "Living in Viellci"
Oh my~
Thank you so much for sharing the game on the site~! =D
I'm honored <3 🤗
also posting games on steam is not free, and really need to do this and that which... really annoying since I'm lazy to manage multiple game page xD
I feel bad for MDRG after preparing all of that so it can be posted on steam
Another place to promote your game is LewdCorner.
You can make a video for it on LBRY/Odessy, even if it has adult content. Another idea of promoting your game is that you could put official game cg on the anime image boards (boorus), like Gelbooru to promote your game.
As for what happened to MDRG, that was wrong on Steam's part and that made Steam look bad again. Wither they realize it or not.
Ooo!
Damn... you just made me discover new sites that I never know about xD
Thank you so muchhh 😭🙏
Yeah, the first thing I noticed is that this is definitely based off Imouto! Monochrome
what is millies lust percent for?
Eheh, that is not yet implemented, so no purpose atm, but will do on update 0.3
ok
no sex yet¿
not "yet" ^^
alrighty then, i'll be waiting
Finally new update!
Yay! and soon the next update will start xD
Epic news!
Hey NC131 i have a problem
The game crashes the moment I pass a dialog
I have the ver 0.2-apk
Maybe you should contact him on discord and tell him the detailed problem, and maybe you can provide a video report
Heya Nick 08 cam! and massive thanks Labia for the reply! yes please do provide video report and detailed problem so I can diagnose the problem to fix it ^^
I really like the new improvements and I will only say that there's probably need to be a more explicit description of the "harasment" menu, because I did found out that there are different dialogues when your trust and interest is like double the requirment, especially for the first kiss. I hope in the future updates those could be count similiar to Iris' trust.
Anyway, I must say, the story is actually really interesting! I just love the setting, it's not that much futuristic and I love MC and Iris' place in this world, it feels unique. For some reason I also really liked the park location, maybe its just the perspective, but it feels somewhat massive and tall. In my head, the green can make a beautiful contrast for this sort of setting!
Also, I feel like it was already noticed, but the clothes are kinda broken. Some of them you could buy and then lose just as you walk into your house, and other were using Millie's standart clothes for the movie cutscene (maybe it's just not fully implemented). And for some reason my map was just split up horizontally. It worked tho
Looking forward to see this game flourish!
Oh my~ Thank you so much Cinnamo O for the feedback!!
Im interested about the "harasment" menu you're talking about and the split up horizontally map. Do you mind to tell me more about it? like giving me a screenshot of it and tell me the problem? =]
I want to fix it rightaway before starting the next update ehe
seem like this was inspired by another game called "imouto monochrome" which is one the better eroge games, i hope your game does even better than it
Thank you lignite!
And yes it is inspired from that game ^^
I LOVE that game. I love this style of game and very happy i've found this early on, instantly knew it'd be something i'd be interested in.
As fun as it may be instantly jump to H content, there's a pay off to doing to slice of life content and falling in love over time.
Thank you so much DaveSan for playing the early access 0.2! ^^
Glad you enjoyed the game~ =]
how do i increase interest?
Turn off the SFW toggle on option, and then you can see new options to increase it ;]
Just downloaded this, and I'm absolutely loving it. Is there a set date for when the next update will happen, because I can't wait to keep playing!
Also does anyone know any similar games like this? Preferably also on itch.io?
Thank you so much for playing Phillycheesecake! ^^
I'll announce the next update next week (7 days from now)
and it's going to be a massive one! 🔥
noooo seven days is too long, I want it now :(
Sadly, I also have stuff to do In real life, so it's quite tricky for me to manage time 😭
I hope you understand and i appreciate your patience!
Ofc, take your time! It's honestly not hard at all to impress me so I'm sure I'm going to be blown away by the update. And plus I also get that life can get in the way, so always prioritize yourself before your work
Hehe Thank you Phillycheesecake~
I will try all my best to improve the game and add more content on the next update! 🔥
glad to see the update!congratulations:)
Thank you l10yd ! =D
How much trust and interest do you need for the expansion of the shower together option?
Expansion for shower together is 200 trust and 100 interest
Thank you so much Labia for telling xD
希望能有中文!
以後更新可能會需要翻譯幫助，目前我會專注於遊戲擴展~^^
I managed to get Millie's lust level pretty high, but that doesn't seem to change anything and I still can't figure out what that's for exactly, maybe I'm missing something. I assume the purpose of it still hasn't been implemented and it will be revealed in a next update?
If you check the read me.txt, he mentioned that Millie's lust doesnt do anything in this version, and yeah maybe the dev will do something about it in the next update
Thank you Labia for telling =] and yes, the purpose of Millie's lust will be implemented in the next update! ^
OH HELL YEAH FINALLY AN UPDATE! I took solid 3 hours off full review to set things straight. So il mostly just put personal likes and dislikes on this game, as i said in my first comment here this comment wont be about hate, but rather instead to speak out off my mind so with that out off the way lets get started with positive things.Ok now that we have putted positive things out off the way lets talk about negatives which there arent a lot, but still there are some.
"harasment" i go instantly save and then try it to see if something actually hapens (spoiler for people that dont play, but are curious it does not)Well this was my you can say "deeper" reviews about this game since in the last version i just left a quick comment and that's it, but that one didn't do enough justice so i patiently waited for this update, still even tho i pointed out some flaws in this game i still LOVE IT! Hope i get to see more from you NC131!
Ayyy! I really appreciate your honest review and sharing your feedback Zack on crack! ^^
If you have any other suggestions, do not hesitate to tell me! =]
Love that there's a real clock at the bottom of the screen. Really liked that.
To be honest, I add that so I can track the time when I develop the game xD but looks like it's gonna help other people too, so I leave it as it is lol
I just found this game today and absolutely loved it. I hope one day I am in a position to support you and your game but for now I am broke sorry ;-;
Thank you for playing the Early access LayersSG! ^^
glad you enjoyed it !
and don't worry, your support by giving a rate and positive review is enough~ =]
is it possible to leave her without a shirt?
heya natep115!
and no, you can't, the purpose for the option "MHN" on "H" option would be useless ^^
whats the point of removing cloths in the wardrobe then?
Why not? It's a Fan service ;]
also im not going to spoil the future reason for that~ x]
How do I dodge on Android here?
Oh yeah you cant dodge the attack from millie yet, since there's no changes for the prologue, try to skip the prologue
Oh ok