Hey! Very cool and cute game! Just a problem : during the prologue, it’s required to press an arrow key and arrow keys existn’t on mobile, so i had to skip the intro which is a bit sad. Good luck anyway! :D
Thank you for playing the early access @Vermillion Crimson! and don't worry about the prologue, I'm revamping the whole game ;]so basically you're not missing anything!
The game is very cool! I played it for about 30 hours :) I'm really looking forward to continuing. The author is well done, he was able to pick up a simple but accurate drawing. And yet, the author can write where you can leave a review of games . I will definitely give this game 5/5 stars!
I'm glad you enjoyed the early access so far _VLADCO_! ^^
In this 0.2 version, you can increase her interest by talking "naughty" in the talk option, and if you can't find it, go to settings and make sure the SFW Toggle is off (on is indicated with aqua box)
and keep in mind that the save file won't work in the next update, as I implement more stuff and changed the system =]
If you have any suggestions for the update, feel free to comment and I'll see if I can add it to this update while I'm still working on it!
I have an idea. You can add another cute girl and access to the purchase of new apartments.
I also want to talk about the error. When I buy new clothes for Millie, I encounter this error. Clothes are not added to the list of open clothes, but there is a dialogue with Millie about new clothes.
If there are any mistakes in the text, then I apologize. I live in Russia and use Google translator.
And about that, it's already on the list for the future update ;]
As for the error, yes it's already been discovered, and I'm going to revamp the shop system too, so you can also interact with the shopkeepers~
Your English is good, as I'm not an English speaker myself xD got a lot of grammar corrections from my friend when he was checking the dialogue line...
I'm glad I don't inconvenience any mistakes. I'm bad at grammar 😂 But I'm glad we found a common language. I was worried that Google translator would translate strangely, but it turned out that it wasn’t.
I just played without sfw and the gameplay became even more interesting. I myself would not have thought to look in the settings again, thanks for that.
If in the future I have any amount, then I will definitely support your project, because I want it to continue to develop in a good direction.
working on the full chapter 1 story and the system overhaul, this actually took a lot of time as I work on the game all alone. I really appreciate everyone's patience since I can't rush it to make the game enjoyable =]
you can check the progress in my discord server or my Patreon feed~
you can also join on my discord dev stream to see how I work on the game xD
if you scroll thru the comments, i already answer it~
Basically, i forgot to code the input on mobile device... Don't worry, you can skip it. I'm revamping the prologue anyway, and the rest of the events =3
I happened to see your game over at Kimochi. I'm not sure if I can show you the link due to it being a pirate site. Though, pirate sites have their use for advertising games.
Oh! I don't mind if the game was on other sites, I'm happy if someone puts and shares my game on their website tbh! ^^
But! Be aware that I'm not responsible for any virus attack or anything after you download it from the other sites since all I put in the game zip file is just Thanks for downloading text =3
even there aren't many NSFW contents now,but I just addicted Myself into thiswonderful game.
and for My beloved game.I have some suggestions for you My Dear:P
1.in the prologue.there is a QTE act.butttt, I can't do ANYTHING to react this!!!!AND I just die and die and die(I'mAndroid BTW)SO I just skip the prologue,and I don't know the previous stories between MC and millie:(
2.the clothes are too expensive!I have to workreallyhard to earn the money(almost 1k per day in happy mood)
3.This game is really ADDICTING.when I playing it,I just forget the time:( even I have class in the morning. hahahah I m just kidding:)))
Actually I don't have questions anymore. the only thing is the content are so limited.I really wanna see the update:P
BTW THX for your developing,I love the gamejust like I love you(hahaah just kidding(^3^))
The dev was working on the next update, he's been revamping most of the stuff in the game, including the prologue, the stores (adding more clothes), and adding more options in the game.
And i think he mentioned that the third update, he will finish the first chapter (the gun making part) so in the next update he doesn't need people to replay the game
Ohh, basically you can do whatever you want, being nice or something, the story isn't focused on romance, more on the mystery and the world... In short Life simulation visual novel... I guess Dx
Do you need help on improving on grammar? I'm an english major and I can gladly help improve the english to make the story feel more cohesive. Either way, I really like this game! Can't wait for the update
I put together a bunch of texts that I feel are more correct than what is in the game. "A" texts are what is already present, while "B" is the proposed alternatives. "C" is notes on my reasoning, wherever I feel appropriate.
The version played is v0.2.
#1A: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday and he need an urgent request."
#1B: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday, he had an urgent request."
#1C: The addition of an "," helps the sentence flow more naturally.
In the context of this sentence "he need an urgent request" doesn't make sense in English. This is because it implies that the father is creating a situation, rather than wanting one to be resolved.
#2A: Raymond - "A cheap weaponry...it mays sound impossible, but..."
#2B: Raymond - "Cheap weapons. It may sound impossible, but..."
#2C: While "weaponry" is technically correct, it doesn't naturally fit in this context. The "..." was replaced by a "." because the overuse of an "..." can feel weird, and a single period here makes Raymond sound more experienced in his field. "Mays" is definately wrong, with the only correct usage in English being as a name - typically a last one. EG, "Billy Mays".
#3A: Raymond - "Yeah, also gather some information about the crystals in the city."
#3B: Raymond - "Yeah, also while gathering information about crystals in the city."
#3C: The sentence doesn't flow quite right. While technically correct, the context with prior text boxes makes it feel unnatural.
#4A: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city"
#4B: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city."
#5A: Raymond - So I, as his son and as a weapon tinkerer, travel from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5B: Raymond - So I, as his son and weapon tinkerer, traveled from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5C: By removing the "as a", the sentence feels less repetitive. That part is actually fine, but I felt that I should mention the alternative wording. "traveled" is more natural for this sentence, due to being past tense. "travel" implies present or future tense.
#6A: Raymond - "Father had his hopes on me, having to accomplish it all in a month."
#6B: Raymond - "Father pinned his hopes on me, to accomplish it all in a month."
#6C: "had his hopes on me" is not a wording used in English. Thus, I replaced it with something that conveys a similar idea but recognized in English. "having to accomplish it all in a month" is technically correct, but the context makes it less natural than the rewritten version.
#7A: Raymond - "For if were to fail, my father's hand would be forced, having to manufacture weapons of inferior quality."
#7B: Raymond - "If I were to fail, my father would be forced to manufacture weapons of inferior quality.
#7C: "For if were to fail" is incorrect. It doesn't convey as much information as it could, and trying to speak it as-is would be awkward. When in doubt about text, speak it out loud and see if rolls off the tongue naturally. "My father's hand would be forced" Is technically correct and a wording often used in English. The issue is that what comes afterwards didn't flow naturally. I recommend using this wording elsewhere in the game, as it is a good one.
#8A: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes but most importantly, wasting his time.
#8B: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes, but more importantly, wasting his time.
#8C: Without the extra comma, the sentence is hard to say in real life and more difficult to read. "most importantly" while technically and contextually correct, is not often used in English. "more importantly" is a much more common way of conveying the idea. Both wordings are valid!
#9A: Raymond - "It was my father recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#9B: Raymond - "It was my father's recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#10A: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing."
#10B: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing, I've decided to use an alternative core for the weapon."
10C: Technically correct, but didn't feel quite right. By integrating both sentences together, the sudden stop from "weapon designing." is removed.
11A: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took it, and researched it until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took them, and researched until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took one, and researched it until now."
11C: By using "it", you imply a single crystal, while "ones" is plural. I put together two revised texts, one for a plurality of crystals - and the other singular. I think the plural text is better, but I don't know the full story.
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend."
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend..."
12C: The sentence is correct, it just feels awkward because the period is a hard-stop. By having the trailing "...", it is implied something grabbed Raymond's attention.
13A: Girl - "All I know is ... I've been in a street ever since."
13B: Girl - "All I know...I've always lived on the street."
13C: The formatting of " ... " is a bit odd, so I altered it slightly. The latter half of the sentence is confusing, in a way that I believe to be unintentional.
14A: Girl - "Why bother ask those questions."
14B: Girl - "Why bother, asking those questions?"
14B: Girl - "Why bother asking those questions."
14C: The original form felt awkward. I recommend the revision with the "?", but the version with "." may be suitable if she is making a statement.
15A: Raymond - "They kidnap almost every outcast in every dome city."
15B: Raymond - "They kidnap outcasts in all dome cities."
15C: Using "every" twice feels very repetitive and makes the sentence harder to parse.
16A: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of day you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of time you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the number of days you've spent with Millie."
16C: Using "day" twice doesn't feel good. In addition to this, the latter "day" lacks plurality. When more than one day is spent with someone, "days" is more appropriate.
Aside from text, I have a bit of confusion regarding the SFW mode: is it "on" or "off"? Having text that says "SFW mode is ON/OFF", with the appropriate word being hi-lighted would make the toggle more understandable.
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Any news on the next update?
You should check out his discord or patreon, because he's mostly post devlogs there.
Wait Is Theres A Discord Server Of The Game??
Beep. =3
Hey! Very cool and cute game! Just a problem : during the prologue, it’s required to press an arrow key and arrow keys existn’t on mobile, so i had to skip the intro which is a bit sad. Good luck anyway! :D
Thank you for playing the early access @Vermillion Crimson!
and don't worry about the prologue, I'm revamping the whole game ;]so basically you're not missing anything!
glad you enjoyed the current version!
stay tuned~
Cheers!
sex?
No.
t yet.
heart shattering.
the game is really good i played for hours, i was looking for a game like this for a long time. when will a new update come out?
Since I'm working on the massive update and system overhaul, December is my best guess (not including irl situation and device)
glad you enjoyed the 0.2 Akynoro! ^^
Cheers!
The game is very cool! I played it for about 30 hours :) I'm really looking forward to continuing. The author is well done, he was able to pick up a simple but accurate drawing. And yet, the author can write where you can leave a review of games . I will definitely give this game 5/5 stars!
And more. Can you suggest how to raise the level of interest for Millie? I haven't figured it out for 30 hours😅
I'm glad you enjoyed the early access so far _VLADCO_! ^^
In this 0.2 version, you can increase her interest by talking "naughty" in the talk option, and if you can't find it, go to settings and make sure the SFW Toggle is off (on is indicated with aqua box)
and keep in mind that the save file won't work in the next update, as I implement more stuff and changed the system =]
If you have any suggestions for the update, feel free to comment and I'll see if I can add it to this update while I'm still working on it!
Cheers!
Thanks for such a quick response!
I have an idea. You can add another cute girl and access to the purchase of new apartments.
I also want to talk about the error. When I buy new clothes for Millie, I encounter this error. Clothes are not added to the list of open clothes, but there is a dialogue with Millie about new clothes.
If there are any mistakes in the text, then I apologize. I live in Russia and use Google translator.
Cheers!
P.s. I went into the game and checked the settings, it turned out that SFW is indeed included. Now it will be even more interesting to play. 😀
No worries _VLADCO_~ =3
And about that, it's already on the list for the future update ;]
As for the error, yes it's already been discovered, and I'm going to revamp the shop system too, so you can also interact with the shopkeepers~
Your English is good, as I'm not an English speaker myself xD got a lot of grammar corrections from my friend when he was checking the dialogue line...
Once again thank you for your support _VLADCO_!
I'm glad I don't inconvenience any mistakes. I'm bad at grammar 😂 But I'm glad we found a common language. I was worried that Google translator would translate strangely, but it turned out that it wasn’t.
I just played without sfw and the gameplay became even more interesting. I myself would not have thought to look in the settings again, thanks for that.
If in the future I have any amount, then I will definitely support your project, because I want it to continue to develop in a good direction.
If not a secret, then the next update soon? :)
Currently working on the update~ ;]
working on the full chapter 1 story and the system overhaul, this actually took a lot of time as I work on the game all alone. I really appreciate everyone's patience since I can't rush it to make the game enjoyable =]
you can check the progress in my discord server or my Patreon feed~
you can also join on my discord dev stream to see how I work on the game xD
How do you dodge knife in prologue if you're on Android? I don't wanna skip prologue to know what's going on
if you scroll thru the comments, i already answer it~
Basically, i forgot to code the input on mobile device...
Don't worry, you can skip it. I'm revamping the prologue anyway, and the rest of the events =3
Cheers!
When it update reply me
I'll inform everyone =]
Will it eventually be in color, or strictly black and white, (or greyscale)?
You'll see in the next update~ =]
Cheers!
This game lookslike has an potential
yo very good game and amazing drawing, do you have money cheats?
You can do cheat engine cheat or save editor for that.
Hmm question does it work on Android?
Hmm not entirely sure, but maybe you can search it up on Google "How to edit Renpy game save file for android" or https://www.reddit.com/r/RenPy/comments/pqki93/save_files_on_android/ this might help.
Cheers!
Thank You My Guy!
Glad it helps! =3
as Labia said 😁
Jesus THE ART STYLE IS AMAZING And The Ui Too
Hoping Will 0.3 will come out soon ^_^
Glad you liked the early access @Lyndon's! ^^
I will do my best in this update! 🔥
Cheers!
Did you take inspiration from the game: Sister! Seikatsu Fantasy?
I do, it's stated on the previous comments =3
When's the next update?
My best bet is December, still working on it tho!
thanks for asking @Kentang11 ^^
Cheers!
Hey man, This Game is Pretty Good, The User Interface is Clean & your Art Style is Pretty Cute
Hoping for this game to be successful, Im gonna recommend this game
I'm happy you enjoyed the early access @Xenon! =]
Amen, will do my best! 🔥
Cheers!
Heyyyy,i like this game
Glad you liked the early access @Myenglishsuck ^^
I'm still working on the update, stay tuned!
Cheers!
keep up the good work👍
How to dodge…I was press the left arrow but nothing happen and I died…I was replay 10 times but still cannot dodge the knife…please someone help me 🥲
Are you playing on PC or Mobile?
Mobile/Android🥲
Oh yeah, i forgot to code the input on mobile device...
Don't worry, you can skip it. I'm revamping the prologue anyway, and the rest of the events
liked the nanachi signature the tic tac toe game! Good made in abyss reference
Ikr xD
I just discovered that too, it's funny touch
Since I love MIA so much, why not put it as an easter egg to the game x]
how do you get intrest?
Check the option if the sfw is toggled or nah, then you can start talkin naughty
The game is similar to imouto life, the story is also wholesome. Looking for another update 💖
Thank you for playing the early access izanamiartemis! ^^
Glad you enjoyed the game =3
Everything in the shop is to expensive
Maybe because in the story, the city is on economy crisis, no wonder everything is expensive
If you have price suggestions, you should tell it to the dev, instead of just saying it was expensive
gib casino or i starve millie with cheap food
Why would you do that to her 😭
me want gambling
Incredible！this is almost another Imouto！Life in my dream.
Look forward to your game!
Thanks for playing Chekvo14721 ^^
Glad you enjoyed the early access =3
android ver keeps crashing every couple minutes making the game unplayable
What device you're using?
samsung galaxy a13
Do you ever play any renpy games before?
no i havnt
Ahh, It seems the problem is caused by the Renpy itself
Can someone please explain why RenPy games suddenly started crashing on my phone? : r/RenPy (reddit.com)
https://github.com/renpy/renpy/issues/3643
Android port is still kinda unstable, I recommend trying the Win/Lin/ Mac
version instead, or use other android device
How to get that bath scene
Make sure SFW toggle off, and have above 200 trust
I happened to see your game over at Kimochi. I'm not sure if I can show you the link due to it being a pirate site. Though, pirate sites have their use for advertising games.
Oh! I don't mind if the game was on other sites, I'm happy if someone puts and shares my game on their website tbh! ^^
But! Be aware that I'm not responsible for any virus attack or anything
after you download it from the other sites since all I put in the game zip file is just Thanks for downloading text =3
Cuz I forgor to add the function there 😔
But don't worry, in the next update, the prologue will be revamped ;]
i swear im blind
i cant figure out how to leave that clothing store
guess i was blind
Make sure to check the shirt page on night mode, you forgot to buy the camisole
- Labia
You know what?
I realllllly really love this game:D
even there aren't many NSFW contents now,but I just addicted Myself into thiswonderful game.
and for My beloved game.I have some suggestions for you My Dear:P
1.in the prologue.there is a QTE act.butttt, I can't do ANYTHING to react this!!!!AND I just die and die and die(I'mAndroid BTW)SO I just skip the prologue,and I don't know the previous stories between MC and millie:(
2.the clothes are too expensive!I have to workreallyhard to earn the money(almost 1k per day in happy mood)
3.This game is really ADDICTING.when I playing it,I just forget the time:( even I have class in the morning. hahahah I m just kidding:)))
Actually I don't have questions anymore. the only thing is the content are so limited.I really wanna see the update:P
BTW THX for your developing,I love the gamejust like I love you(hahaah just kidding(^3^))
The dev was working on the next update, he's been revamping most of the stuff in the game, including the prologue, the stores (adding more clothes), and adding more options in the game.
And i think he mentioned that the third update, he will finish the first chapter (the gun making part) so in the next update he doesn't need people to replay the game
Thanks for leaving your review and feedback on the game YUN01 ^^
Yes don't worry, the prologue is being reworked so, you don't miss anything there =3
and about the earning, it is also being reworked xD
I'm still unsure what makes it addicting, if you mind, do tell me the addicting part, and I want to improve it =]
Is there any chance of having the ability to change the name of the MC?
No, I don't think you can. The dev said, the story is based on his manga
Ok, thanks. Goodbye.
WOOOOOOOO
What's with the woo-ing 😭😭
It is nice to have a good ‘woo’ in awhile. WOOOOOOOO!
hmm, I guess you're right. WOOOOOOOO!
WOOOOOOOO!
WOOOOOOOO！
The god is back! WOOOOOOOOOO
Wuh? where?! 😱
Wait, I thought u were the one that made the previous living with imouto?
what do you mean by previous living with imouto? 🤨🤨
One question: DO you know Inusuku?
yes I DO =3
Make sure to check the shirt page on night mode, you forgot to buy the camisole
When we getting another update love this game
Around october - december
based on my financial, irl situation, and the devices ^
What fetishes/tags?
Not quite sure, as I will expand and add more stuff with every update... Vanilla for sure
Will this game let you be a pos or is this full wholesome/romance is basically what I'm wondering tbh
Ohh, basically you can do whatever you want, being nice or something, the story isn't focused on romance, more on the mystery and the world... In short Life simulation visual novel... I guess Dx
So I can abuse the loli?
Sorta, that will bring you to the bad end xD
Can anybody tell me the stroy of prologue
You can ask it on the server ;]
I'm on android how do i dodge the knife in the beginning?
You can't, the dev forgor to check that part, so you have to skip it lol
thank you
Do you need help on improving on grammar? I'm an english major and I can gladly help improve the english to make the story feel more cohesive. Either way, I really like this game! Can't wait for the update
Heya again Philly!
Sure! Hop into the discord server so I can contact you when I made a new script! ^^
Already in! My discord is ickyloops#2806
I put together a bunch of texts that I feel are more correct than what is in the game. "A" texts are what is already present, while "B" is the proposed alternatives. "C" is notes on my reasoning, wherever I feel appropriate.
The version played is v0.2.
#1A: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday and he need an urgent request."
#1B: Raymond - "My father called me yesterday, he had an urgent request."
#1C: The addition of an "," helps the sentence flow more naturally.
In the context of this sentence "he need an urgent request" doesn't make sense in English. This is because it implies that the father is creating a situation, rather than wanting one to be resolved.
#2A: Raymond - "A cheap weaponry...it mays sound impossible, but..."
#2B: Raymond - "Cheap weapons. It may sound impossible, but..."
#2C: While "weaponry" is technically correct, it doesn't naturally fit in this context. The "..." was replaced by a "." because the overuse of an "..." can feel weird, and a single period here makes Raymond sound more experienced in his field. "Mays" is definately wrong, with the only correct usage in English being as a name - typically a last one. EG, "Billy Mays".
#3A: Raymond - "Yeah, also gather some information about the crystals in the city."
#3B: Raymond - "Yeah, also while gathering information about crystals in the city."
#3C: The sentence doesn't flow quite right. While technically correct, the context with prior text boxes makes it feel unnatural.
#4A: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city"
#4B: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city."
#5A: Raymond - So I, as his son and as a weapon tinkerer, travel from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5B: Raymond - So I, as his son and weapon tinkerer, traveled from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."
#5C: By removing the "as a", the sentence feels less repetitive. That part is actually fine, but I felt that I should mention the alternative wording. "traveled" is more natural for this sentence, due to being past tense. "travel" implies present or future tense.
#6A: Raymond - "Father had his hopes on me, having to accomplish it all in a month."
#6B: Raymond - "Father pinned his hopes on me, to accomplish it all in a month."
#6C: "had his hopes on me" is not a wording used in English. Thus, I replaced it with something that conveys a similar idea but recognized in English. "having to accomplish it all in a month" is technically correct, but the context makes it less natural than the rewritten version.
#7A: Raymond - "For if were to fail, my father's hand would be forced, having to manufacture weapons of inferior quality."
#7B: Raymond - "If I were to fail, my father would be forced to manufacture weapons of inferior quality.
#7C: "For if were to fail" is incorrect. It doesn't convey as much information as it could, and trying to speak it as-is would be awkward. When in doubt about text, speak it out loud and see if rolls off the tongue naturally. "My father's hand would be forced" Is technically correct and a wording often used in English. The issue is that what comes afterwards didn't flow naturally. I recommend using this wording elsewhere in the game, as it is a good one.
#8A: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes but most importantly, wasting his time.
#8B: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes, but more importantly, wasting his time.
#8C: Without the extra comma, the sentence is hard to say in real life and more difficult to read. "most importantly" while technically and contextually correct, is not often used in English. "more importantly" is a much more common way of conveying the idea. Both wordings are valid!
#9A: Raymond - "It was my father recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#9B: Raymond - "It was my father's recommendation and it was his old apartment."
#10A: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing."
#10B: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing, I've decided to use an alternative core for the weapon."
10C: Technically correct, but didn't feel quite right. By integrating both sentences together, the sudden stop from "weapon designing." is removed.
11A: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took it, and researched it until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took them, and researched until now."
11B: Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones. We took one, and researched it until now."
11C: By using "it", you imply a single crystal, while "ones" is plural. I put together two revised texts, one for a plurality of crystals - and the other singular. I think the plural text is better, but I don't know the full story.
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend."
12: Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend..."
12C: The sentence is correct, it just feels awkward because the period is a hard-stop. By having the trailing "...", it is implied something grabbed Raymond's attention.
13A: Girl - "All I know is ... I've been in a street ever since."
13B: Girl - "All I know...I've always lived on the street."
13C: The formatting of " ... " is a bit odd, so I altered it slightly. The latter half of the sentence is confusing, in a way that I believe to be unintentional.
14A: Girl - "Why bother ask those questions."
14B: Girl - "Why bother, asking those questions?"
14B: Girl - "Why bother asking those questions."
14C: The original form felt awkward. I recommend the revision with the "?", but the version with "." may be suitable if she is making a statement.
15A: Raymond - "They kidnap almost every outcast in every dome city."
15B: Raymond - "They kidnap outcasts in all dome cities."
15C: Using "every" twice feels very repetitive and makes the sentence harder to parse.
16A: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of day you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of time you've spent with Millie."
16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the number of days you've spent with Millie."
16C: Using "day" twice doesn't feel good. In addition to this, the latter "day" lacks plurality. When more than one day is spent with someone, "days" is more appropriate.
Aside from text, I have a bit of confusion regarding the SFW mode: is it "on" or "off"? Having text that says "SFW mode is ON/OFF", with the appropriate word being hi-lighted would make the toggle more understandable.
Oh my... Thank you so much for the fix!
My apologies for the grammar mistakes in the current version 🙏😔
But don't you worry, I'm revamping the Prologue and the settings ;]
If you want to see the update goes, check out my discord server or the Patreon page, as I usually post the devlog there =3
A great game which has a unique style and alot of potential. Cant wait for the new update.
Sankyu for playing the game Igor.peo! ❤😁
The game design is very unique. I love it! Hope for new updates!
Glad you like it Tattierdragon36! I'm still working on the update ;]
you can join discord to see the progress~